WALT: write an annotated reflection showing judgment, opinion
analysis.
SC:
1. Use past verbs that show mental processes i.e think,wondered
guessed.
2. Use the Help/Hindered box to structure your writing.
3. Must inform the audience how you improve or did not improve.
4. Must provide examples and explanation on why you became a better
writer or not.
My Writing I Made in Term 2.
In my writing I have seen a lot of progress. Since the beginning of the year I only was writing about three lines but now I can write over 1,000. I am always excited to write a story when I get to school I have gone along way with my progress of writing and I am so happy that I can muster my ideas, write my story so I can put it on the blog for the world to see. I have also noticed that when I start writing I’m really hooked into it and my eyes never wander off the screen.
Before the chromebook, I was making a lot of spelling mistakes and my writing never made sense. My hands were getting sore, I had messy work, I was getting tired of erasing out every time I made a mistake and you could even see the mistake when you're writing over it again. Now I think I have really good typing skills and my work is always neat. This is one reason why I have made progress in my writing.
The best thing about narrative writing is, you can make up anything and you can even choose your own characters for your story. But I still need more help on my story’s when I proofread. I use the Read & Write app. When I finish my story I don't need to read over it again and again, we have an American lady read to us and it really helps me a lot because I can hear where my mistakes are.
I have noticed that my typing is improving compared to the beginning months of this year because I’m coming more and more Faster. I love chromebooks because you don’t need to spend time erasing out and getting sore hands from writing with a pencil.
I have learnt to become a better learner on the chromebooks and because of this I want to share the chromebooks to the world. Now that I have a chromebook, I am not worried about my presentation, spelling and proofreading and because of this I have become a confident writer.
