Climbing Tauanui
Oh my gosh! That hill is HUGE. I begin walking up the steep slope, my legs are already wiggling like a jellyfish and i’ve only just started. My legs are aching, my mouth is dry as I swallow and my heart feels like the wheels of a train zooming along the railroad tracks fast and unstoppable. I want to stop, I’m going to stop! I grasp onto the fence like my life depends on it and take a deep breath in and out, in and out. Maunga Tauanui is steep, and this slope feels never ending. Step by step I focus on putting one foot in front of the other. I’m trying to ignore the burning pain in my calves but it’s hard and i’m getting tired. I can feel sweat slowly dribble down my back and face like dew on a window. I breathe in and out. Everything hurts - my legs, my back, my heart and lungs even my arms feel heavy and the wind isn’t helping. It feels like it’s pushing me back down the maunga.
It’s not until I approach the bend, I welcome the cool crisp breeze and take in the beautiful sight of Roto Kereru. It’s waters seem cold and freezing but as I look closer there’s so much beauty. The water is glistening and sparkling like diamonds. I wish I could stay here forever, even dip my toes in its freshness but I have to keep climbing.
Heart pounding, legs screaming, back aching and lungs burning I just want to sit down and stay where I am….halfway between Lake Kereru and the top. I feel parched and reach for my water bottle in my bag. Maybe that will give me some energy?
When I got up by the Crater I looked down with my eyes open wide and I couldn't believe how steep down it was and how gigantic and wide.
Then i got up to the top I felt the beauty wind and seen the stunning view and then i drop to the ground because I was so tired i didn’t want to leave.
….THE END….
Hey Myra,
ReplyDeleteWow! what an awesome story you have here. It shows how you feel when your walking up the Maunga and how your body feels like. your story is really interesting and it hooked me in at the start of the reading. Keep up your awesome writing you can maybe become an author.
Bye bye Jessie:)