Recount
“Kah Boom” as the explosive unexpected bomb blows. On Sunday a beautiful afternoon Layla and her whanau made a mighty blockbuster bomb. Seeing that bomb blow made layla panic. The hot scorching sun was out. waiting for the bomb to blow up her brother lit the bomb a trifle thing happened.
Making the bomb was very tough grabbing the gunpowder. everything look like a pigsty after they came to the end of putting it together bunching it all up in little bottles.
She was feeling excited at one moment but then she had a odd feeling it was going to blow the entire house up. But she was just kidding herself. looking at the bomb with a large amount stacked in was frightening.
‘What if it sets the trees on fire’ thinking to herself ‘and what are we going to do if that terrible thing happens’.
So she called out to her brother “ will it set the trees on fire. “
He replied back louder “ NO.” she didn’t know much about bombs and how they will react in this hot dreadful sun.
But her brother was saying gunpowder can not set on fire. she was sure he was being a build ups and lying to her.
As they all opened the back door and fired the bomb out there she was looking at Rangi wondering if they would run inside. But they decided not to.
As Layla’s brother grabbed the lighter and lit it they all ran away but nothing was happening.
until James walked close and there it went “ BOOOOOM “ James looked like he was blown away.
At the end of all of this Layla wanted to make another one so they did but that's by far the bestest bomb Layla seen and heard she hopes they try it again.
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