Shake-out presentation

Reading log - So much to tell you

so much to tell you

12.10.15

A lot of people complaining a lot of days writing in my journal until saturday and sunday missing those two days out but i could still remember what i had done in those  days. Again it is school weekend are over.wondering what it feels like where her father is in jail.hoping that you are happy liking off getting him something from where i was going with the school.This was just  a catch up note.

so much to tell

14.10.15

feeling hostile unfriendly.Using him as a puppet.putting her hand up his t-shirt.Im sitting in bed until lights out.Dont wanting anyone to read his diary.What she is saying is tickling her funny bond.should star being greatful for things.

Levelling Sheet

WALT: level a piece of writing 

Element	Rubric	Comment
Ideas	6	Ideas were sharp. Clearly written.
Structure and Language	5	His words weren’t words a 12 year old would be using.
Organisation	6	His work was organised into paragraphs..
Vocabulary	5	Words were a bit immature. But a good start.
Sentence Structure	5	They were basic sentences, but they were constructed accurately.
Punctuation	5	Found a few mistakes. But it was still pretty good.
Spelling	6	No spelling mistakes.

Art Survey

Arts Survey

Describe your ability as an artist. What do you like about Art?

I kind of like drawing because it gives me the ability to draw what I want and express myself. I like building and constructing. That’s what my dad does.

Describe your ability as an actor/ presenter. What do you like about acting/ presenting?

I love acting because I like being a different character; I like dressing up in costumes.  I am conficent when presenting to the whole school.

Describe your ability as a dancer. What do you like about dance?

I don’t really like dancing, it’s just not my thing. I'm not a person to dance with.  

Describe your ability as a singer/ musician. What doe you like about music/ singing

I love singing. I always sing with my sisters and being a singer and love music - listening or singing

it just takes me to a different world.  

Acid Rain

Mihi 2015

Recount

Recount

“Kah Boom” as the explosive unexpected bomb blows. On Sunday a beautiful afternoon Layla and her whanau made a mighty blockbuster bomb. Seeing that bomb blow made layla panic. The hot scorching sun was out. waiting for the bomb to blow up her brother lit the bomb a trifle thing happened.

Making the bomb was very tough grabbing the gunpowder. everything look like a pigsty after they came to the end of putting it together bunching it all up in little bottles.

She was feeling excited at one moment but then she had a odd feeling it was going to blow the entire house up. But she was just kidding herself. looking at the bomb with a large amount stacked in was frightening.

‘What if it sets the trees on fire’ thinking to herself ‘and what are we going to do if that terrible thing happens’.  

So she called out to her brother “ will it set the trees on fire. “

He replied back louder “ NO.” she didn’t know much about bombs and how they will react in this hot dreadful sun.

But her brother was saying gunpowder can not set on fire. she was sure he was being a build ups and lying to her.

As they all opened the back door and fired the bomb out there she was looking at Rangi wondering if they would run inside. But they decided not to.

As Layla’s brother grabbed the lighter and lit it they all ran away but nothing was happening.

until James walked close and there it went “ BOOOOOM “ James looked like he was blown away.

At the end of all of this Layla wanted to make another one so they did but that's by far the bestest bomb Layla seen and heard she hopes they try it again.