Wednesday, 23 September 2015

I did Knock First horror story.

I DID KNOCK FIRST

There was a girl named Jade, one cold dark, silent night she had gone missing, and died at age 12. She died in a beautiful lake called Lake Rotorua, it was through word of mouth the best place for camping. The locals in Rotorua said that she was camping in the forest with her mother, father and her 2 siblings.

When they were camping Jade's family had gone to sleep, so Jade had jumped out of her tent and looked at the stunningly beautiful sky that was floating above of her head. She crawled out of the tent like a spider then got up and grabbed her torch. she had went for a hikoi  in the forest. she found a cold glistening lake and on that lake was a beautifully designed waka it was brown and the carvings on the waka were paua. In the front of the waka there was a face. The part she didn’t know was that the waka was owned by a scary maori man and his taniwha that lived in the dark rocky deep lake. Jade jumped in the waka she paddled in the middle of the lake where no one can see her on either side.Image result for a old scary maori manImage result for ngatokimatawhaorua

Jade grabbed her pencil out of her unknown pocket and she found a book full of drawings of the taniwha, as she grabbed the book she looked at all the drawings when she scrolled through the last page it was a piece of writing and it said Image result for scary taniwha
“E te taniwha hoki mai hoki mai” Jade never new maori so she said  it  over and over again.

Something was wrong She heard a knock but she just thought it was the wind.
there was a second knock but then It was even louder
She felt really frightened.
Then She seen a thing swimming her way she tried to hide in the seats of the Waka. But it did not work.
She was screaming it was getting closer and closer and even closer she didn't know what to do but scream for help.

But her family didn’t hear anything they were fast asleep.

She was screaming her lungs of she was really scared.
BUt she couldn’t do anything about it she tried to paddle fast but then boom
the Taniwha ate her.

but in the Waka the book was there all the pages had human writing but the last page did not

and it had said

I DID KNOCK FIRST

                

2 comments:

  1. Great story 😘 Keep it up x Very scary 😘 There is a couple spelling mistakes but other than that your doing great.

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  2. Great story 😘 Keep it up x Very scary 😘 There is a couple spelling mistakes but other than that your doing great.

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